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poem [Aug. 11th, 2008|12:01 pm]
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[snow_k]
[mood |just woke up]

I've decided to make this an ongoing every monday so here's the next one;


My heart has a pound
a thump, thump, thump
out of my body
it seems to jump

My love can only me seen
through beautiful, romantic, eyes
my heart just cannot be stopped
but something inside me dies

I want true love
a fairy tale ending
at one first kiss
so many emotions blending

Just one thing
a major set back
something that I can’t not face
a major spot in my heart that’s black

I don’t like anyone
in that that way
and when I do
to him, what to say
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[User Picture]From: smccloud
2008-08-11 09:53 pm (UTC)

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I *love* these new poems!
[User Picture]From: nualafaery
2008-08-11 10:50 pm (UTC)

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your poems are so great. i look forward to mondays now! :)
[User Picture]From: ferretdad
2008-08-15 07:14 am (UTC)

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I like your sense of rhythm. I'm especially fond of a well-placed anapest/spondee combination.
From: (Anonymous)
2008-09-09 05:03 am (UTC)

something great

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some people got talent I could never right poems but I like reading your. Thanks