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random epiphany [Aug. 9th, 2008|01:31 am]
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So I was in bed trying to fall asleep when I decided to wright an autobiographical poem about what the goal that I have been working towards lately. So since I have not achieved my goal yet, the poem is not finished, but here are the first few stanzas;

On my p.e. mat
I sit upside-down
with 2 things on the floor
hands and crown

my legs are bent
because you see
if I did a full headstand
they would fall on me

I was the best at tripod
in my whole class
but when it came to headstands
I fell down like glass

because of this fact
as sad as it is
I got a c
on our p.e. quiz

now months later
and but two weeks ago
I decide I'd get it
then I mastered it like a pro

When I come back to school
I hope to have the next step
of a flat out hand stand
but I need to go prep.


to be continued...
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From: (Anonymous)
2008-08-09 10:58 pm (UTC)

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Thanks! On a rough working weekend, I needed that. Love it! No obnoxious edits, though I have to admit that in my present state, I wanted to read the end of the third stanza as "I fell on my..."

Mine's probably not suitable for school though.

Jim H.
From: erik3k
2008-08-10 07:55 am (UTC)

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kudos on the usage of the word stanza!
[User Picture]From: ivy_rat
2008-08-10 10:47 pm (UTC)

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Awesome poem dear.

I know you will succeed. And your headstand is just perfect.
From: (Anonymous)
2008-08-23 10:35 am (UTC)

Randam epophany

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Hi max
Meanwhile, it's been over 2 months since I've written anything, and I'm sorry about that. I've been busy - Real Life's been kicking my ass (though for all that, it's been pretty good to me) and I've been spending a lot of time RPing, which sort of derails the writing urge. I do have something that I've sort of been working on intermittently, though; and so, for your reading pleasure and to whet your appetite (so to speak) I'm posting a few excerpts here. The finished product will probably feature everyone-plus-Brian-slash-everyone-else, it's that kind of fic, and since it's at 61.8Kb now and nowhere near complete, it's probably going to be fairly long by the time it's done. Working title is Hunger.

Max

Michigan Drug Addiction (http://www.drugaddiction.net/michigan)
From: (Anonymous)
2010-10-09 02:48 pm (UTC)

Simple But Great...!

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Really well written. Simple language and goes with a flow. Liked it
Kepp it Up :)
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Jerin Fernandez (www.jeekers.info)